It’s fair to say that life has been somewhat disorganised in the last few months, so I’ve not been particularly active here for a while. However, there has been some positive activity in spite of that. Although I can’t confirm a date yet, it’s safe to say that my next book, Renegade, will be published in the next month or so.
The manuscript has been edited to within an inch of its life, some very kind authors have already provided positive feedback and quotes, and I’m now just going through the final stages of getting it ready for release.
In the background, my delightful cover designer has been hard at work, so it’d be remiss of me to not provide a reveal…

Isn’t it brilliant? (Well, I think so, anyway…)
Of course, there will be quotes added to the cover before publication, and then there’s the blurb. Some of you might recall that, in advance of releasing Borderline last year, I put a few variations of that blurb out for feedback. That helped enormously, so it’s a no-brainer to do it again for Renegade.
With Borderline, I was starting with a blank sheet, so there were several variations in the format. Renegade is the second in the series, so this time I’m sticking with the format that was settled on for Borderline, which means there is a degree of similarity. Anyway, I’ve listed six options below. So, let me know your thoughts.
Blurb 1
When you don’t trust the police, should you trust a Cowboy?
When Rand Scott’s past comes calling, it couldn’t be worse timing
A police investigation is going nowhere and a grieving wife wants answers
It should be a straightforward job, but life isn’t as simple as that.
Animal rights activists and farmers are a bad combination at the best of times
And farms aren’t the only places to keep livestock
Blurb 2
If the past is a foreign country, the present is a rogue state
There’s never a good time for bad news and Rand Scott isn’t a happy bunny
An old flame, a dead animal rights activist and a half-hearted police investigation are just the start
Then there are the people he thought he’d never see again – and they have questions
But words aren’t the only things that are brutal
And farms aren’t the only places to keep livestock
Blurb 3
If you don’t trust the police, there’s only one place to go
The death of an old acquaintance drags Rand Scott back to a life he left behind a long time ago.
A police investigation is going nowhere and a grieving wife wants answers
Putting minds at rest should be easy and it gets him away from the city
But factory farms and animal rights activists can be a sensitive combination
And Rand soon discovers a world where violence is the only common language
Blurb 4
When you don’t believe the police, turn to the Cowboy
When Rand Scott’s past comes calling, it couldn’t come at a worse time
An old flame is looking for help, and he’s not the only one that thinks it’s a bad idea
Still, it gets him away from the city for a while
But factory farms and animal rights activists are a bad combination at the best of times
And Rand soon discovers just how brutal life in the country can be
Blurb 5
When the past comes calling, it’s the present that suffers
An old flame, a dead animal rights activist and a half-hearted police investigation are not what Rand Scott was looking for
But they’re enough to take him away from the city and back to a life he’d left behind
A chance to put right his wrongs
As he starts to poke around, though, he uncovers a lot more than he expected
And soon finds out just how brutal life in the country can be
Blurb 6
When the past comes calling, it’s the present that suffers
When Rand Scott gets an opportunity to drop even further off the radar, he gets more than he bargained for
An old flame, a dead animal rights activist and a half-hearted police investigation are just the start
Then there are the people he thought he’d never see again – and they have questions
This rural idyll can be brutal
Especially when Rand discovers farms aren’t the only places to keep livestock
Last year I ended up taking elements from more than one of the suggested blurbs and merging them together – so if you feel there are lines from different options make more of an impact, feel free to tell me.
I’ve already said that I’m aiming to get this published in the next few weeks, so this does mean I don’t have a lot of time to get this together for my cover designer. With that in mind, I’ll use the feedback given to make a decision on Monday 23rd March. Any comments or suggestions after Sunday 22nd (GMT) will sadly be too late for me to consider.
Finally, as ever, any feedback you provide is appreciated. And, in recognition of this, for those responding by the 22nd, I will be happy to send you a copy of the eBook for either Renegade or Borderline (if you haven’t already had it) as a thank you.
I really liked blurb 4 the best but I definitely think a wee mix could work too!
Thanks, Nicola. Obviously, you have the advantage of knowing who the Cowboy is! I’m not sure if someone who hasn’t read Borderline will buy into that – but, then again, that might be where the mix comes in. Appreciate you dropping by. Hope all is well with you
For what it’s worth, I think Option 3 works best for me. Good luck. See you at the Sykehouse Fest. Colin
Thanks, Colin. Yes, Sykehouse will be here before we know it!
Just to be awkward, I’m going to go with both 2 & 5. Both make me want to know more!
Good luck choosing.
Lulu
I can handle awkward, Lulu. Just getting some feedback at all is helpful. Thanks for taking part. I hope all is well with you